Im venting in poetry to warn you people...so if its vulgar..

Tear me into peices
break my inner dreams
hold me down and pull me out
and tear up all my seams

fighting for my rights
to be the person i can be
i wanna slap you in the face to prove to you
that you dont control me

Tears can just control the
anger fills me deep
but when you feel the way i do
you'll just sigh and weep

You pushed me aside
you let held me down
with your own force
your disappointed frown

*Fuck* that man
i dont need you
im leaving now
*Bitch* we are through

Leave me here
Let me die
Let me go
pushed aside

I dont love you
i never will
leave me out of it
as it was then

Im my own
not needing your premission
So let me be
Leave it all to commision

lol with the *Fuck* and *Bitch* part it took out the softness of the poem but the rest is really good

i know
i was pissed
you cant blame me

no i dont sometimes poems are better when we write them in a certain mood like when were angry, sad,etc......